Some people think technology helps us save time but others believe wastes our time.
These days, it has become a growing trend to see people regard technology as a time saver or a time waster. As such, it has both merits and demerits, although I am opinion that the former outdo latter. I lay down reasons to support my viewpoint with relevant examples.
There are myriads of arguments in favour of my stance. The most conspicuous one is that technology has made world a small place which has decreased time we spent on doing things like travelling, talking with each other and many more. People not only realised the positive impact of using technology such as we can travel to different countries in short span of time, which would not have been possible without technology, but also measured the gravity of its relevance. Needless to say, all these upside stand a technology enthusiast in good stead as far as using technology as a timer saver is concerned.
There, however, are some drawbacks which can overwhelm the potential benefits of using technology. The primary one lies in the fact that people who uses technology tend to get addicted to it and forget basic things like eating, sleeping and many more. Another overt aspect of argument is that it has negative impact on people's health. Hence, it is apparent from aforementioned discussion why people are concerned about using technology.
In view of above outlined argument one can conclude, despite having some drawback, benefits of using technology is too great indeed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this upside' or 'these upsides'?
Suggestion: this upside; these upsides
... of its relevance. Needless to say, all these upside stand a technology enthusiast in good s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97131147541 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63451281137 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627049180328 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6800067333 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.083333333 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206726462258 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683124662654 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677657069272 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12022189502 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419676342231 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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