There are a lot of inventions nowadays, which invention do you think is more important in our day-to-day life. What are the benefits and detrimental effects of it?
Nowadays, the Internet technology has become a long-running dispute among the people all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether the Internet is efficient and important in our day-today life or not?”. It is a widely held view that the online communication is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that the Internet as a communion tool plays a vital role in the world of cut-throat competition. Therefore, I express several reasons why I support is idea. First and foremost is that this modern technology has made life excessively easy and people are able to interact by video chat or purchase their basic needs online. Secondly, it can be argued that these days an extensive range of medical treatments, such as remote surgery is being performed by the Internet. In addition to this information, A group of scientists, working at a prestigious university conducted that in the world of the Internet there are a wide variety of information in terms of socio-economic and educational matters that open youth’s mind to a new idea.
However, there is no doubt that using the Internet provides people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that this virtual environment comprising a lot of unpleasant subjects as well as it can be a root of many crime and violence that leads to damaging consequences in community. Moreover, it is quite clear that this technology has made people became more likely isolated, while they can participate in social activities.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that proper use of the Internet in order to raise our public awareness must be taken into consideration. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ays, the Internet technology has become a long-running dispute among the people all over the w...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun crime seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much crime', 'a good deal of crime'.
Suggestion: much crime; a good deal of crime
...subjects as well as it can be a root of many crime and violence that leads to damaging con...
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Line 7, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, in addition, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 318.0 242.827586207 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11006289308 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03017569071 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 139.433497537 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 379.143842365 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.7547801492 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.416666667 104.977214359 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.25397266985 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0861022048113 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0264387940241 0.0925447433944 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442101862889 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0518945401081 0.151781067708 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042401937966 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.