University is useful for future career. To what extent do you agree?
In modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on whether university is useful for future career. While, some people argue that university career is not relevant for future career success, on my point of view university education is essential for future career. In this essay, I shall discuss factors in strengthening my view while, analyzing both the sides of it.
First and foremost, students can experience myriad of advantages through university education. For example, students get the opportunity to do further research on specific subject area which he does have a higher interest. Besides that, they get the opportunity of meeting professionals and enhance their knowledge. At the same time, majority of the students start their university education just after their schooling, therefore those who does not posses a degree will face difficulties in finding job opportunities in the labour market.
On the other hand, some people argue that university education does not cater the modern world requirement. But, most of the governments have taken necessary actions to establish universities which provides technical studies together with academic studies.
In conclusion, it is recommended to promote university among younger generation because it will help for innovations which will give a positive contribution to the national income. It is also believed that, governments should open up the the university education to the private sector which would create more educational opportunities for the future generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63675213675 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99101645166 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619658119658 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9680383383 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.909090909 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26445660857 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097946054164 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108116972833 0.071462118173 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148344590925 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10645865463 0.0609392437508 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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