What is the best invention of last 100 years, the computer, antibiotics, the airplane, and explain why?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the modern technology where computer has significantly play great role helping through all sectors. Computer has many advantages and used for many purpose since it has tremendous facilities. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration.
There are many arguments in favour of my stance but the most preponderant one is that computer can do multi-tasking work such as we can watch movie, e-mail, download and other various features. In fact, Not only computer help multi-national company to work in fast pace but it also help in inventing and exploring the new things. We can find overwhelming evidence that computer helps to save our time and make our life easier. Needless to say, all the merits people in a good stead as far as learning and saving time is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that computer is one of technology and with the help of internet it can be one of the effective source of communication. Beside, we can use computer to watch film, edit video and save our programs. For example, we can save program and watch it whenever we are free is one of the special feature of computer. Hence, it is apparent that why many are in favour of computer because of it's multi-purpose.
In view of this arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of computer are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'played'.
Suggestion: played
...nology where computer has significantly play great role helping through all sectors....
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Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun purpose seems to be countable; consider using: 'many purposes'.
Suggestion: many purposes
...mputer has many advantages and used for many purpose since it has tremendous facilities. In ...
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Line 2, column 282, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...ompany to work in fast pace but it also help in inventing and exploring the new thin...
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Line 4, column 12, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...cause of its multi-purpose. In view of this arguments outlined above, one can concl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, for example, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83870967742 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84085100688 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3760915857 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0237520181248 0.242375264174 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0106372716108 0.0925447433944 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0186520004466 0.071462118173 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0129383328497 0.151781067708 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147090661046 0.0609392437508 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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