Who is responsible for Climate change, whether Government or industries?
Indeed, climate has been changed a lot; it has created various problems for the people living all around the globe on various places. In this regard, protagonists assert that it is rising because of the negligence of government whereas antagonist censures this notion; they personally feel that it must be solved by the industries. Although one school of thought believe that industries are responsible, my perspective is that government is responsible for the change in the climate.
There are several reasons why I say government is responsible for this change. The first and foremost point is that government does not legislate strict rules of those who are destroying the environment. These are also not punished by the government; thereby, problems have been accelerated up to greater extent. People of some of nations do not prefer public transport although it has been provided to the public. Their private vehicle emit dangerous gases which are bringing shift in the climate change. These are the reasons I believe government is responsible.
Therefore, it is an essential that government must take strict action against those who are creating problems for the local people. Government must legislate some rules and regulations and these must be imposed strictly on them. For example, if one family has two cars with different numbers; they must be encouraged to share their vehicles or to use public transport. This may help to solve the issues which are rising significantly.
In the end, it is concluded that government must legislate some rules on the people so that the problem of the climate change could be solved it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 324, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the nations') or simply say ''some nations''.
Suggestion: some of the nations; some nations
...lerated up to greater extent. People of some of nations do not prefer public transport although...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 10.5418719212 218% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16541353383 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78128421097 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541353383459 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3548273189 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1428571429 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284671959716 0.242375264174 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966298002848 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873704093159 0.071462118173 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166892688565 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608594747155 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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