Students doing part-time jobs - advantages and disadvantages.
Part time jobs recently has become very popular among students sparked heating conversation. Many people claim that doing part time jobs can make them fulfill some of their needs. Others reject this notion and argue that these jobs can destroy their study time. In my opinion, I completely agree with the statement that part time jobs could help students to gain knowledge about working culture before entering into original work field. This essay would further elaborate both advantages and disadvantages of these jobs with clear examples and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To start with, due to increase of prices and development of all industries, students need so many materials and goods to cope up with fast growing world. Salary they receive from part time jobs are not only used for studies, they also use for entertainment activities. As we know that all students are not rich enough to pay their fees and buy necessary materials like a rich kid. The only one solution that they could do is part time jobs. Due to the labor shortage, there are lot of jobs available for part time in the many fields working as waiters, delivery boys or even cleaning service. Apart from money, part time jobs help student to learn the working atmosphere from so many people as partners. After gaining good amount of working experience from different sectors, students can decide what they want to become in future.
On the other hand, there are many disadvantages associated with part time jobs. It destroys and kills our regular study hours. Students with high desire to buy something even though if it is not required will take so many part time jobs which leads to reduce in marks in exams. These jobs make students less efficient and in worse case will leave their studies for money that they have seen in part time jobs.
In conclusion, part time jobs could help the students those who came from poor family background. In a nutshell, it can be concluded that advantages of these jobs overweighs disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, apart from, in conclusion, in my opinion, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1207.87684729 139% => OK
No of words: 343.0 242.827586207 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90670553936 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 3.92707691288 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42786958874 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 139.433497537 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565597667638 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.172041131 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.49293618831 0.242375264174 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162448070639 0.0925447433944 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838499921166 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.334621108397 0.151781067708 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592612185899 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.