It seems that nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. For some people, it is medium to spread news & awareness to others whereas for some others, it acts as a companion. What is your opinion on this? Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
In this day and age, due to its usages such as spreading news, awareness and its entertainment programs, TV has become a vital need for living. Although the TV applications regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive among the public around the world, its disadvantages can damage people's life. For the purpose of this essay, I will analyze my viewpoint about this device.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support this remarkable invention as an important part of living. At first, one of the negative effects of Television is damaging to eyes. However, besides this, it could benefit people by spreading the news in different fields such as sport, science, and history. For example, there are many news channels that spread daily news or even online events by Television set.
In addition, Television programs may have bad education for children if do not be controlled by parents. Nevertheless, it could be a good entertainment for free times and idle. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2016 has shown that a significant number of people in many communities spend their resting times in front of Television and watch programs like movies.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this magic device, I profoundly believe that despite the negatives in so much watching TV, it plays an essential role in modern life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1615720524 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88559401334 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672489082969 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3642927427 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.454545455 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3636363636 7.25397266985 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221403747263 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788912645384 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047544267274 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123144117099 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04474949138 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.