There has been a colossal upsurge in the most significant trend to see prodigies discussing the effects of rural-urban migration across the world, be it in the affluent or impoverished nation. In this essay, I shall elaborate the prime motives behind such mass shifting and impact of this concept on the individuals and society as a whole.
At the outset, there are myriad of reasons which can be attributed to the movement. Firstly, the most conspicuous one is that an ample number of employment opportunities attract the people from the rural area to seek the job in the urban area. Not only citizens get the proper education leading towards making their career glittering but prominent amenities like medicine and transport also benefit the people and secure their next generations future. Moreover, technological advancements in the metro cities and big towns make the life easier and enjoyable.
However, another pivotal facet of the argument is that the negative side of this migration will overwhelm the potential benefits of this trend. The inflow of numerous migrants will create a substantial demand for housing and employment in short period of time. Practically, it will not be possible to accommodate such mass people in the existing scenario heading to increasing unemployment rates which may give a birth to unavoidable problems like indulgence in criminal activities for survival. Needless to say, the associate demerits of rural-urban migration would have an adverse far-reaching impact on the life of migrants as well existing urban population.
To recapitulate, from the above-mentioned arguments, one can conclude that for improving the standard of living of rural people, migrating to urban areas is not the better option. Rather government should take a kin interest in the development of countryside area.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34602076125 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99290556928 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 139.433497537 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622837370242 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8336363626 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.75 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246634732707 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078791191653 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901470997884 0.071462118173 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143725574025 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801234539332 0.0609392437508 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 55.0591133005 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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