What are the pros and cons of staying connected on social media for 24 hours a day.
In the globalized world now the social media has becoming very much popular. Face book, twitter, linkedin and many other social medias are now using by each and everyone without any age difference. These social medias have their own advantages and disadvantages and here i'm going to discuss about them.
To begin with, we all know that with the development of the technology social medias are now getting very much popular among everyone. Especially, after the invention of computer and latter on with the mobile phones now it ie very easy to access social medias. Moreover, there are some advantages of staying connected to the social media for all over the day. Firstly, we all have the valuable chance to get up to date on current situation of the world by connecting social media for all over the day. Furthermore, we can have latest and especial news of our friends and relatives which we cannot connect through mobile or land phones. Sometimes it is cheaper to connect with people through social medias rather than direct calls or messages. In addition, it makes sure that we did not miss any valuable or relevant events and news as we connected to the social medias throughout the time.
In contrast, this trend has its own disadvantages as well. First of all, it wastes our valuable time which we can spend on another productive work. For example, these days students spend hours and hours on social medias and complained that they don't have enough time for studies. Moreover, it creates a huge gap between our loved ones who are near to us and on the other hand it connects with people which we never met. This will end up with lots of heart breaks as we are too busy with chatting and we haven't time to spend with our family. Finally, addicting to social media destroy our physical fitness also. We are too lazy to have our evening walk, but interested with searching gossips on social medias.
To conclude based on the above mentioned factors it is clear that using social medias has both pros and cons.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-17 | Nkhatri | 80 | view |
| 2019-08-12 | iapunzalan | 77 | view |
| 2019-05-03 | neelu sharma | 85 | view |
| 2018-12-19 | titanic-basnet | 72 | view |
| 2018-10-14 | amirnaji24 | 88 | view |
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- In less developed countries, tourism has developed significantly in the last decade, discuss the disadvantages and advantages. 70
- Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. It is regarded as a medium to spread news and awareness and for some, it acts like a companion. What is your opinion? 77
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Suggestion: haven't
...as we are too busy with chatting and we havent time to spend with our family. Finally,...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...cial media destroy our physical fitness also. We are too lazy to have our evening wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, in contrast, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 20.9802955665 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 31.9359605911 169% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1207.87684729 139% => OK
No of words: 353.0 242.827586207 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73937677054 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 3.92707691288 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3576588304 2.71678728327 87% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 139.433497537 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535410764873 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 379.143842365 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.6157635468 238% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.2202642412 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.9444444444 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286451754173 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106687560011 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992399120204 0.071462118173 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175445349328 0.151781067708 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485044621786 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.