Does video communication with doctor help patients to cure any disease? Pros & Cons?
Recently, the phenomenon of distance treatment by using Internet and videos and its corresponding effects has sparked a heated debate. Although this type of consulting with doctors is beneficial as it regarded by a substantial numbers of individuals both constructive and positive, others hold opponents views. I am inclined to believe that going and talking with doctors is more beneficial than using videos.
From a social stanpoint, communicating with doctors by videos has several benefits which are rooted in the fact of modernity. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the modern ways of consulting with doctors and utilizing the modern facilities to cure and treatment. This type of connection has become popular in modern cities because of some difficlities including heavy traffic, an array of settlers who wait for seeing doctors and time limitations. Furthermore, this type of communicating is faster, easier, cheaper and more convenient for citizens.
On the one hand, there is no doubt diagnosing some diseases is quite difficult by video connections. Doctors need to distinguish some problems by examine the patient and just observing them is not sufficient. According to some researchers under taken by a tangible prestigous world-renowned university which asserted that loads of disease have some examination to diagnose.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of going to the doctors' office is far more outweigh than communicating with videos.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, while, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54655870445 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14285320475 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603238866397 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3787850361 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.545454545 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214072926282 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789779564864 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420656360197 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116691331734 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183602853234 0.0609392437508 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.