Developed countries should take more refugees from poorer countries. Do you agree or disagree?
Each year many people face war & it’s after effects. Millions of people get displaced due to war or natural disasters & they are left with no place to live. Some people believe that developed countries should adopt more refugees from poor countries & I completely favor this debate.
To start with, many people have been victims of war crime that has been normally initiated by developed countries. The prominent example is America that has started war at Syria & before that Vietnam. In these countries standard of living is pretty low now since people strive for basic necessities of live. It is the moral obligation of such countries to provide shelter to these refugees so that they can have better lives as well. The good thing about adopting refugees is that, they do not tend to become a problem for any country since they are initiating their lives all over again & strive to earn good bread & butter for their families.
In this regard, one good step has been taken by Canadian Government that they start adopting refugees more and more in their country in order to bring economic stability around the world.
One important factor that must not be overlooked it that people who faced natural disaster or war, are deprived people looking for help on basic requirements to live life. If not properly taken care they can be rebellious & can create issues locally or internationally. All human beings have the equal right to live their lives peacefully & happily & developing countries should play their part in this regard.
To recapitulate this debate, it is very much important that we consider giving a good life to refugees to let them start their life all over again. By adopting refugees, it will not only benefit those particular people but also add good value in developed countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 282, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... pretty low now since people strive for basic necessities of live. It is the moral obligation of ...
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Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... add good value in developed countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98006644518 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50483195895 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58803986711 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4873397433 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.071428571 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173174633722 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645031677141 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781895955104 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106607873881 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399267607583 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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