In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Being overweight or obese and poor health and lack of fitness is a new health hazard in many countries of the world. There are several causes for this phenomenon and some possible measures that can be taken to tackle this burning issue.
Increased average weight may result due to a number of reasons. The first and foremost cause is the poor diet. For instance, an average diet consists of higher caleriec value compared to the past. Fost foods and cola and sugary drinks are the best examples for these. Sedentary life style and lack of physical exercises is the second main reason for being overweight. In fact, people are busy with their shedules and they do not have enough time to exert themselves physically. Even though some have leisure time, they prefer staying indoors watching movies, surfing the internet, chatting with friends online or playing video games. Stress and lack of awareness about the drawbacks of being obese are other minor contributing factors forb this issue.
There are number of measures that can be taken to solve this problem in the future. Public health programmes which are designed to increase the awareness of the people about disadvantages and health problems which occured by being overweight is the solution for this issue. School is the best place to start this process. Education on healthy meal plans, the significance of physical activities and sports and how mental and spiritual wellbeing affect the total health of a person can be given to the children in an appropriate manner. In turn this knowledge would be aquired by parents. For example, if a child is demanding for a healthy diet or physical activity, parents would ultimately adhere to the needs if the child. By this method the goal can be achieved.
In most of the countries there are number of people who are overweight and their health and fitness are decreasing. However, there are numerous reasons for this problem and careful planning and implementation of possible solutions to overcome this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01785714286 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51773049327 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53869047619 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9930153353 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7368421053 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6842105263 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230164223693 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732502716619 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066675216144 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154264764258 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298055711935 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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