Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
In modern era, the world has changed with many systems where super market is one of the best example. More numbers of shopping malls are increasing in the big cities and towns and as result small shops are declining. My opinion is that although there are large number of big shops but yet some small shops never replacing because of famousing. So, I will discuss my opinion point and samll shops are replaced by big shops.
To begin with, new technology have huge power and so that entire systems have become effective and we can see that in the big malls are built with automated systems. No doubt, people always prefer first only smart system because people get good qualities, options, selections, entertainment with fun and others. For instance, in the malls, we can see all kinds of shops like clothes, jewelry, toys, domestic items, refreshment items and some others with different brands options for all ages people. Furthermore, people can save time, discount offer on membership cards and entire mall shops are made with central air conditioners.
On the other hand, although there are several advantages to buy in the big malls as discussed above paragraph but still there is no any effect on the small shops especially street and downtown areas in the cities. For example, a shop near my house always crowd by people because daily routine items are available and require domestic items get very easily with few minutes. Moreover, some small shops have good reputation and give satisfaction to people because of effecting service and one class quality products.
In conclusion, no doubt, increasing number of big malls are replacing some small shops but some things are never change the mind of the people which are satisfaction, quality and other things which make to people forcing towards small shops.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: now
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Suggestion: changed
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 304.0 242.827586207 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98684210526 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42216078758 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.7687732192 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.333333333 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.25397266985 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266718856498 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112110700593 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707162069477 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175275318803 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765118880861 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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