Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Food spell over is one of the main concern for many developed countries, where is these issues are the point of interest for many of the countries that suffer from less movement society. The people normally has one main target which is the better living! This concept not always be specific about the heatlier life or better body shape. Hereafter, some community started to raise the knowledge about the aging problems and some causes of difficult life at the latest years of your lifetime.
Some countries like GCC have been listed recently the highest countries with obesity rate. These countries due to the hot weather the people avoids the running, sport, even the non-walking behavior. This attitude leads the person to gain wieght and ends him up with 3 digits of the weight scale! This is also to draw your attention, that the working load one of factors that cause this non-walking lifestyle. Nonetheless, the overall environment in these countries urge the customer to buy more and consume more. Obviously, the greedy consumer is the target of many companies especially the food and beverages. In results of that, one of these countries, mainly Dubai started last few years to improve the healthy body lifestyle knowledge among the communities. This was one of their vision for the coming years. Therefore, they have built many free gym area, and improve the parks to include a running way that made from rubber to make it more comfortable for all users.
As a conclusion, the main reason for any countries to improve the people healthier lifestyle is the better knowledge and information that need to be spread over about all consequences for non-healthy life styles disadvantages.
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- Nowadays most green energy is becoming evermore prevalent in both developed and developing countries. Some argue they greatly reduce costs and are better for the environment, others believe they are a serious threat to energy security. Discuss both views 78
- A government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 77
- A government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 72
- Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 55
- Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us want to be and to look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 62
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
... is the better living! This concept not always be specific about the heatlier life or bet...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, nonetheless, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00709219858 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58197915704 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578014184397 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8779064873 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.666666667 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.25397266985 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106573525065 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361530097465 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306652341679 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684462267949 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382133554686 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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