You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter:
explain your situation
describe your problems
tell him/her when you think you can start.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Manjusha C Nair and I am writing this letter to keep you informed that I will not be able to join the new job offered by you in your company in the next week i.e on 25th of November as stated in the offer letter, which I received last week.
As I am currently working for Bio-Com company, I have been involved in a one year project work which has begun since eleven months and I am leading the team and have certain tasks to be completed in three weeks time from now. As I am committed to this project, it will be unfair on my part to move from this job right now.
Basically I am encountering three main problems.Firstly I need to complete my pending project and submit the report to my higher authority. Secondly, I will have to serve at least one month's notice period post my resignation.. Thirdly, the financial settlements will also take a month and certainly my presence is required in the office to complete all formalities.
I would however be able to join your company at the earliest by December 1st i.e. two weeks from now. I regret for the inconvenience caused.
Kindly consider this as a request.
Thanking you in anticipation.
Your's faithfully,
Manjusha C Nair.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...y I am encountering three main problems.Firstly I need to complete my pending project a...
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Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one month', 'a month', or simply 'months'?
Suggestion: one month; a month; months
...Secondly, I will have to serve at least one months notice period post my resignation.. Thi...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...months notice period post my resignation.. Thirdly, the financial settlements will...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60550458716 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76965472408 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596330275229 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.382769805 44.8134815571 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2727272727 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23303445349 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846373016629 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993707146752 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122730355832 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119388774646 0.0580467560999 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.