Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
We live in a world where men and women are considered different and are not suited to do all the tasks equally. This has been the prevailing notion that continues to exist from time immemorial. Individuals cite the physical differences to be the root cause of such inequality. However, the turn of the world at the 20th century, has seen women taking the leadership positions and are seen to grow in the ranks to be one of the most influential people in the world. I believe that tasks are equally suited to men and women alike, and one cannot negate this equality with the notion of physical differences.
First of all, the statement states that many tasks are not suited for women, due to their physical differences. It is to be understood that women were turned away from their basic rights, such as the right to vote, the right to work , in many countries until the past century. While it is true that when it comes to the physical strength, women in general are weak to men, one cannot refuse a women to use their basic rights. However, this inequality rose due to the prevailed notion that women are suited for household works and men are the breadwinners for the family.For example, women's right to vote was disenfranchised in the United States of America until the 1950's. This inequality cannot be attributed to inherent physical differences. Similarly, women were prohibited the right to drive a vehicle in Saudi Arabia until the last year. Therefore, it is to be understood that physical differences are not the reasons for depriving women the opportunity to succeed in life, while it is the perceived and antiquated dogmas that do the harm.
Secondly, the statement states that women are not equally suited for many tasks. When it comes to such a topic, one must understand what the tasks are. Does the task involve the use of physical strength, or does it require the use of education and decision making abilities? As stated above, in general, women are comparatively weaker than the opposite sex. However, this does not mean that women are considerably weaker. What I mean to say is that the ratio of women taking part in activities that include physical exertion is comparatively lower than men. Take for instance the role of a stunt coordinator in the movie industry, while we can see a profuse number of male artists, they are a few women who take up the role. However, the involvement of women in performing such exhilarating tasks has considerably increased over the last few years.
However, the involvement of women in the taking up the leadership positions of many companies have risen by a large extent. This has been through the help of women empowerment schemes. For example, the government of United Arab Emirates has issued a large number of schemes that promote women to take up the positions and responsibilities that were considered to belong to only men. Therefore, the number of women taking up responsibility and leadership positions have considerably risen.
To conclude, one cannot differentiate the role of a woman or a man based on the physical differences. The real challenge of any goverments of this world is to provide equal opprtunity to each human being irrespective of their differences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: a woman; women
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i mean, in general, such as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2692.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 551.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88566243194 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84493438435 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81855182754 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426497277677 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 884.7 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9869206275 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.538461538 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1923076923 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410712152747 0.243740707755 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119190459548 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107572036681 0.0758088955206 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218728299223 0.150359130593 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859323987618 0.0667264976115 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.