What are the pros and cons of extreme sports?

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Similarly
... bad for us weather it can be anything. similarly sports at extreme level also have its a...
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Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: similarly,
... bad for us weather it can be anything. similarly sports at extreme level also have its a...
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Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Before
...ts advantages as well as disadvantages. before concluding the above statementI i, will...
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Line 1, column 454, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , moreover
...come strong. Our mind become more active,moreover retaining power of individual also incr...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...aining power of individual also increase .It should be also introduced iin the sch...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ning power of individual also increase .It should be also introduced iin the schoo...
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Line 1, column 688, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...when we play sports at extreme level we cant concentrate on anythiing else in case o...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... focus only on sports. In conclusion we cant thiink about its advanges but also we h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, similarly, so, well, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 1207.87684729 61% => OK
No of words: 154.0 242.827586207 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80519480519 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.92707691288 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70899876573 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 139.433497537 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616883116883 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 379.143842365 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7636693986 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7142857143 7.25397266985 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156876709709 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821059784724 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700396695832 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156876709709 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 55.0591133005 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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