Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The flourishing supermarkets, in some nations, have negatively affected the ability of local businesses to stand against the competition so according to some the local markets will shut down and ultimately lead to death of the communities in that particular areas. In my opinion, I agree that the local communities will suffer if their businesses flop.
The main reason why the local communities will be affected is that expenses of people will increase greatly if there will be no business around them. At present, people live in the world that is too expensive to meet the fundamental needs of a life. On has to be discreet and stingy in order to live their life smoothly. Closing of the local markets would force the masses to travel for fulfilling their needs such as buying the grocery and other stuff. As a result, people will have to spend unnecessary money on transportation which was easily possible before.This will make the survival of lower- indeed middle class families difficult.
Another point to consider is that having no local business in an area will lead to increase in unemployment, of that particular area, to an alarming rate which ultimately will decrease in population of the concerned community. For example, nearly every member of a society is dependent on its nearby market for their job. No markets would mean no jobs which consequently will direct people towards migration towards the areas of job availability. As a result, the affected community will have less members which will disturb the social lives of many: one of a biggest issues worldwide.
In conclusion, local markets are must for any community to survive. The growing supermarkets are a threat to the local markets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07394366197 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80653683004 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545774647887 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3292740034 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.846153846 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237923947031 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092495831584 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771428063457 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172454596115 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072717378154 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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