As people become increasingly more dependent on motorcars, the public transport systems tend to run down. This has serious consequences on both the existing community and the new communities, which are spreading farther and farther from town centers.
Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Nowadays, although the public transport systems have good benefits, individual are depending on their own vehicles. My opinion is that the private vehicles have myriad merits. So, I will put some points and examples in my further paragraphs.
To begin with, individual can go anywhere and any time by using own vehicles. They can save time and do more works in minimal time period. Also, they can go long way route by using own vehicles. Second, family can set in private vahicular, and we not need even extra pay. Also, we can arrang long and short jourey or picnic schedule. Third, we can safe with our family in the raining and summar season. Moreover, some serious cases, it may be possible to occure serious medical issues in someboday in our family if so our private vahicles always helpful in the emergncy situations.
On the other hand, although private vehicular gives us more benefits but there are some drawbacks which are affecting in our daily life. Firstly, if every people use private vehicular, there would make overcrowding situation in the city or town. Secondly, more vehicles mean to more environment pollution. Apart from this, it may be possible to be more accidents level. Moreover, there are always required to demand of vehicular fuels. Therefore, government must import more fuels which would affect on national economy.
To recapitulate, it can be deduced that private vehicles have numerous benefits for using but we cannot avoid their disadvantages which are affecting on the environment as well as national ecology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, well, apart from, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10588235294 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60643040018 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596078431373 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9381650598 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5882352941 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.70588235294 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0951592658725 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307868668373 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355535563722 0.071462118173 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574829069557 0.151781067708 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401704054825 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 66.0 Out of 90
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