Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement?
Many people believe that we have abundance of choices in regards with every aspect of our life. Thanks to the globalisation and industrialisation, we have numerous products and services to satisfy a specific need. I am totally agree that there are a lot of different options available now in compare to past time.
To begin with, we are living in a modern world where choices are everywhere. They are wider and larger in compare to any period of the past time. From daily use product to luxurious products; we have options available such as what to eat, what to wear, what to study, where to work, where to live and how to live. For example: there many different cousin restaurants in our cities with wide variety of foods and drinks. People no longer need to eat same type of food all the time, they have extensive choices to try variety of taste and flavours. Similarly, to buy a car insurance, we can simply get a dozen of quotes once we provide some information on insurance policy comparing web sites.
Due to the globalisation it has been possible to transport product from the one corner of the world to another. People do not need to stick with local products as long as they can afford the international ones. In addition, advance technology and research activities have enabled producers to meet customer’s specific need. Migration trend has also contributing to add diversity into a community. When people migrate they carry their culture, food and other aspects of life, which could be an interesting alternatives to the locals.
In conclusion, it is quite clear our everyday life is full of choices and options. We have certainly been able to the replace boring stuffs to desired ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...o satisfy a specific need. I am totally agree that there are a lot of different optio...
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Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...ent options available now in compare to past time. To begin with, we are living in a ...
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Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
... larger in compare to any period of the past time. From daily use product to luxurious pr...
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Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ive and how to live. For example: there many different cousin restaurants in our cities with w...
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Line 5, column 511, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'alternative'?
Suggestion: alternative
... of life, which could be an interesting alternatives to the locals. In conclusion, it i...
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Line 7, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sting alternatives to the locals. In conclusion, it is quite clear our everyd...
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Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...options. We have certainly been able to the replace boring stuffs to desired ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, for example, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84641638225 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77968696079 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597269624573 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4086551111 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.75 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184918929755 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054105845383 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505581447717 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110027842623 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533002322507 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.