The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
In my understanding, the word cooperation and competition are antithetical to mind to some extent, but not fully. As, when you start cooperating the sense of competition is lost and similar can be said for competition i.e., when you start competition there is no space for cooperation. A competent mind is where one has to achieve ones defined goal regardless of the consequence and hurdles. On the other hand, the cooperative person has to everything together hand-in-hand to get what he/she want.
First I would like to explain how instilling cooperative sense in a young mind will affect the nature of the person who is full of aspiration to become leader. To become a leader, one should have patience and openmindedness to listen to everyone in the team which he/she is leading. Most of the it's the leader who
finally decide that what is good or bad for his team, organization or group and come into an optimal situation. He/She should have a ability to involve everyone and understand the situation which and be enough smart to take a decision which is a win-win situation for his team. The ability to cooperate everyone's opinion in the decision is all the best leadership and the leader should have this quality.
However, if we talk about the sense of competition in a leader, he/she should have all the competancies to tackle his/her direct opponent. And this sense of the competition will only be instilled if he/she is constantly pushing himself beyond the limit to competition with self. Also, not every other person in a team/group or organisation is a leader. Only one of the best, who has all the competancies to become leader can be a leader and rule.
Moreover, if talk about cooperation and competition simaltaneously. A leader should have should a competition with the rivals not with the fellow teammates, instead there should be cooperation among the team. Competition among the team/organisation can cause internecine inside the group and cooperation among the group will flourish the organization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 494, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...ogether hand-in-hand to get what he/she want. First I would like to explain how ...
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Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
...e team which he/she is leading. Most of the its the leader who finally decide that wh...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...am which he/she is leading. Most of the its the leader who finally decide that wh...
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Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... leading. Most of the its the leader who finally decide that what is good or bad ...
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Line 4, column 132, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n optimal situation. He/She should have a ability to involve everyone and underst...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 337.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02670623145 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04901882161 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474777448071 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7052578469 60.3974514979 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.875 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105072592943 0.243740707755 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036031552452 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365823001161 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0617333576744 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324230350663 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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