Cultural Shock is a new worrying concern for few immigrants. What are the few possible options to eradicate this?
In this modern era, there was an ongoing deliberation among people about the positive and the negative effects on society due to immigrants and new cultures. While it is possible to claim that the culture shock is a mental effect for immigrants, my point of view is that the other concern is more advanced than this. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view while analysing the different sides of the argument.
First and foremost, there are myriad of advantages a person or a nation can gain from the culture such as life quality, security, availability, usability and integrity. For example, Australia has a multi-culture, but people are living without any trouble. Because of the above point, it is taken into account that the quality culture starts from multi-cultural societies.
On the other hand, those who believe the different sides of the argument have a different point of view and say culture shock is a big pain for immigrants. For instance, immigrants have the cultural shock as well as the family sick in very first days, but this will change by the passage of time. Therefore, it is taken into consideration that a cultural shock is a negligible event after a few days of the migration.
In conclusion, it is strongly believed that the immigrants should practice for a cultural change before the migration. In nutshell, it is believed that the governments and professionals should publish more books, videos and articles for the education of immigrants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8689169007 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552419354839 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.4843980791 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.727272727 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.25397266985 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288844327274 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100233247668 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066619922944 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154683043217 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675083337394 0.0609392437508 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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