What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in an era in which new things are constantly being invented?
The important effect of living in era, which was always debatable, but has now become more controversial. The sustainable influence of living in era has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on recent years. In my opinion, the former latter proposition aappears to be rational and this essay will further elaborate my reasons. For forming the positive affect of his trend and thus will lead to be a logical conclusion.
At the outset there are numerous reasons of living in era but the most conspicious one stems from the fact in living era technology has many invention all the field. As an illustration invention in medical science helped to cure many deadful diseases.
Nevertheless according to some people there remain some drawbacks which can certainly overwhelem the potential influence of living in era, but the most alarming one is rooted in the the fact that technology invention lead to more employment of machinery and less human labour when result in unemployment. In addition it can concluded that the invention is impacting the life of working class people.
From what has been discussed above, it can be conducted that the impact of living in era is prominent although advantages outway disadvantages so it will be beneficial for people to live in invential era should be overlooked era.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08636363636 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86259360524 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577272727273 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.2626465924 50.4703680194 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347343653409 0.242375264174 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121632870337 0.0925447433944 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876885383037 0.071462118173 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200774018499 0.151781067708 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826914569818 0.0609392437508 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.