Some people work long hours and hard to achieve success and some give importance to free time for them. Give your opinion and discuss your views.
Recently, the phenomenon of long time working and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of full-time employment is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that colleagues can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, hard achieving success can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that merits annual sallary, as well as job satisfaction, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered a company owner. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both workaholic and hard-working employees apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, free time importance might increase the consequences of human resources. Moreover, fundamental aspects of increase in sallary could relate to this reality that the demerits of a job offer pertain to a professional career. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of the permanent residence is correlated negatively with the permanent employment. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of an unskilled worker.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of successful output far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of low-paid workers prove the significance of seasonal workers, but also pinpoint casual employments implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27711297255 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686274509804 0.580463131201 118% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8670425074 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.416666667 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127946631877 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381920652455 0.0925447433944 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410740563039 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062874808352 0.151781067708 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293618304036 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.37 8.32886699507 137% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 55.0591133005 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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