The time people devote in job leaves very little time for personal life. How widespread is the problem? What problem will this shortage of time cause?
Recent days, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trends to see prodigies discussing the driving reasons behind working for extended hours in the offices. Different distinguished individuals have expressed their views on this trend through various modes of communication including mainstream media and digital media. this essay will further elaborate on why people work for stretched hours at their workplaces and what are its impacts.
At the outset, there are myriad reasons for people working for long hours; however, the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that they want to promote quickly on the job ladder. More specifically, the thirst to impress their seniors and get quicker promotions lead them to work harder and longer. Moreover, people, these days want a luxurious lifestyle and in order to get that they work like never before. For example, a recent study published in The Urban times revealed that 7 out of 10 people want a fully air-conditioned house. Therefore, it is undeniable that financial status and job promotions are the key reasons for people to work harder and longer.
Despite the arguments above, the downside of this trend, meanwhile, cannot be neglected. Primarily, since employees are spending their daytime in their companies, they are getting less time to spend with their family, relatives, and children. Consequently, the family bonding and family values are deteriorating. Secondly, many health issues such as diabetes and blood-pressure are soaring, owing to the physical and mental stress that this lifestyle brings. Hence, consistent with this line of thinking, it is clearly evident that the side-effects of longer working hours are too dire to ignore.
In conclusions, after having closer inspection upon before mentioned paragraphs, I strongly believe that people should keep a work-life balance in their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39931740614 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79614056837 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 139.433497537 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638225255973 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5114125278 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.0 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14747887627 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473397955947 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437780916366 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079738398799 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258935680491 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 55.0591133005 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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