The time people devote in job leaves very little time for personal life. How widespread is the problem? What problem will this shortage of time cause?
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on balancing work life with personal life. While some people argue that the disadvantages of working for long hours outweigh the advantages of it, on my point of view I agree on this argument. In this essay, I shall discuss on disadvantages of working for long hours while analyzing both the sides of it.
First and foremost, there are myriad of disadvantages such as breaking the relationship with your family together with health issues. For instance, people who work for long hours may not have sufficient time to spend for their physical fitness and they tend to consume more junk food because of unavailability of time spent on cooking. In addition, these kind of people will lose their social life and they will not have sufficient time to maintain relationships with their family members, friends, relatives and neighbours as well.
On the other hand, busy people can climb up their career in a short period of time. For example, young people who are enthusiastic on work get promotions at their early ages which help them to achieve their goals within shorter period of time. Moreover, they even can start their own business within the experience they have acquired from their previous job.
In conclusion, it is recommended to balance both the work and social life because money cannot satisfy all the requirements of a life. It is also believed that government has to impose regulations in favour of the employees because otherwise governments have to bear the responsibility of the frustrated workforce.
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- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what has technology affected the types of relationships people make?Has this become a postive or negative development? 84
- Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 62
- The ownership of cars should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 77
- Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in short, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05323193916 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77001873681 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58174904943 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.382722264 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.818181818 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7272727273 7.25397266985 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212959728258 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824983380881 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614326493327 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115985150445 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558006961502 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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