Some people believe that not all criminals should be kept in prison, but that some of them should be allowed to do unpaid work to help the community. Do you agree or disagree.
Sometimes, polices have not better detain lawbreakers, instead they ought to be permitted to work without salary for society. In my opinion, I totally agree with this view to some extent.
Personally, I firmly believe that prison is not the only place where criminals can be advanced themselves to become good people. Before anything else, we should consider a variety of aspects in offences to make a decision about who hit the jail carefully. Otherwise, in a lot of bad situations, prison just mostly prompt people change in several negative ways. To be specific, one of my closest friends name Nam, who has poor family, he lost his parents before he had been 5 years old, so he must live with his grandparents. One day, he stole about 500,000 Vietnam dong by hacking banks, if i am not wrong about the number , then he was forced to come to jail, after 5 years i heard from my friends, he killed himself by a knife in his apartment.
On the other hand, many dangerous crimes should definitely pay for what them did in the past. For some heavy criminals like killing people, defrauding to appropriate properties of others and so on, doing society works do not make them better, actually the only way for them is going to the prison.
In general, although going to prison is one of the effective way to punish crimes, police should give opportunities to work unpaid for some people who have light criminals
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'bettered', 'welled'.
Suggestion: bettered; welled
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y agree with this view to some extent. Personally, I firmly believe that prison...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...0,000 Vietnam dong by hacking banks, if i am not wrong about the number , then he...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...anks, if i am not wrong about the number , then he was forced to come to jail, aft...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s forced to come to jail, after 5 years i heard from my friends, he killed himse...
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Suggestion:
...e to jail, after 5 years i heard from my friends, he killed himself by a knife in...
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Suggestion:
...d himself by a knife in his apartment. On the other hand, many dangerous crimes...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for some people who have light criminals
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, then, as for, in general, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71774193548 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54216550245 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665322580645 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4261531225 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261136932381 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949218759533 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687723334695 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160242727256 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553053248549 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.