Dangerous activities like extreme skiing, bungee jumping etc. and whether you support them or not

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
...ng in our countries. It is inclined was believe that some dangerous adventure sports af...
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Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sk-taking sports help in the development Self-confidence and independence of a pe...
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Line 2, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... independence of a person. For instance, By successfully facing up the challengi...
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Line 2, column 192, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. For instance, By successfully facing up the challenging of adventures sports...
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Line 2, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...facing up the challenging of adventures sports like are scuba-diving and rope-...
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Line 2, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e challenging of adventures sports like are scuba-diving and rope-climbing, yo...
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Line 2, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dventures sports like are scuba-diving and rope-climbing, young people overcom...
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Line 2, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ke are scuba-diving and rope-climbing, young people overcome their fears. Speci...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onents of extreme sports say that, being a extreme sportsman is very risky and da...
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Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ents of extreme sports say that, being a extreme sportsman is very risky and dan...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... will be seriously injured or even die. Also equipment are these sports very expensi...
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Line 4, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ky like rope-climbing and bungee jumping because participant will be injured or e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 200.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07675153368 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7916976048 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8 104.977214359 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 20.9669160288 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12100405501 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443831059202 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445003247172 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821628170421 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.012743251971 0.0609392437508 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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