A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Variety in the education system helps students in navigating their way into professional life. Proper education doesn't only make a successful professional, it also helps them into becoming a mature human being. So, the education system should be designed in a way that will help them to take the right choices. In this paragraph, we will look into the advantages and disadvantages of generic knowledge for a certain period of education. After reading this paragraph, the reader will be able to identify the points needed to be discussed in this certain topic.
Many specialists argue that, the students doesn't need to study the same material until they enter college. In their defence, they are saying that, an arts doesn't need to study math. They prefer to study the topics that they think will help them in their professional career. But to be a proper student everybody needs some knowledge about elementary subjects, so that they can find out in which subjects they are doing better.
Being professionals and getting jobs is not the sole target of the education. Education helps us to be patient and also teach us how to face unknown. If we don't study the rudimentary subjects, then we won't be able to navigate our choices properly. We will be stuck at our everyday life. So, some basic knowledge is needed before we enter the college.
Everybody needs the basic knowledge of math, business and first- aid. At difficult situation the learning will help one to be self- sufficient. The business students who avoid calculus in the middle school, faces problem in the university level. A science student should have the knowledge of basic law and sociology otherwise, while launching his tech- firm he will face difficulties. Everybody should study the history of their nations and how their history shapes their country. Without these knowledge a student will be a proper one and will fail to achieve the primary goal of education, which is becoming human.
There are many examples that shows why a certain rudimentary knowledge is needed to make the education system a perfect one. Without certain knowlwdges the education system will be obsolete and study will become monotonous. It will then turn into a machine which makes professionals not human beings. Education should be practical knowledge based and variety of subjects should be presented before students so that they can prefer the subjects they will be studying in colleges.
In this paragraph, the imporatnce of the same curriculum before entering colleges is discussed. However, subjective knowledge is better for professional part and sometimes subjective knowledge before colleges helps students developing a preference for their subjects.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-29 | AlmeeC. | 58 | view |
| 2020-01-29 | lekuleku | 62 | view |
| 2020-01-23 | nikhil40507 | 50 | view |
| 2020-01-18 | greuela001 | 50 | view |
| 2020-01-18 | vineel | 58 | view |
- Argument Topic: "The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company. "According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced 35
- An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be p 43
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 50
- A pet food company recalled 4 million pounds of pet food in response to complaints that pets that had consumed the food experienced vomiting, lethargy, and other signs of illness. After the recall, the pet food company tested samples from the recalled foo 38
- A pet food company recalled 4 million pounds of pet food in response to complaints that pets that had consumed the food experienced vomiting, lethargy, and other signs of illness. After the recall, the pet food company tested samples from the recalled foo 43
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...nto professional life. Proper education doesnt only make a successful professional, it...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 43, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ny specialists argue that, the students doesnt need to study the same material until t...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an art' or simply 'arts'?
Suggestion: an art; arts
...In their defence, they are saying that, an arts doesnt need to study math. They prefer ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 155, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... defence, they are saying that, an arts doesnt need to study math. They prefer to stud...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...lso teach us how to face unknown. If we dont study the rudimentary subjects, then we...
^^^^
Line 4, column 491, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this knowledge' or 'these knowledges'?
Suggestion: this knowledge; these knowledges
...r history shapes their country. Without these knowledge a student will be a proper one and will...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[6]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'certain rudimentary knowledge'.
Suggestion: certain rudimentary knowledge
... There are many examples that shows why a certain rudimentary knowledge is needed to make the education system ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2273.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 440.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16590909091 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71610497582 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459090909091 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.0 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6549333877 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.4230769231 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178186643103 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543572720606 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698886878555 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100252870626 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682803735286 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.