Companies use advertisements to influence people to buy things sometimes which they don’t need. Give your opinion about this practice?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend to see prodigies discussing the fact that companies use different advertising strategies to grab customers for unnecessary products. Critics, however, claim that these advertising campaigns are just to provide detailed information about newly launched products. I, personally think that former argument is more realistic and worth to believe. in this essay, I shall highlight some of the main features of this statement to justify my argument.
At the outset, there are myriad of argument discussing the fact that advertisement is the tool to achieve maximum sale of the product. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stem from the fact the companies are paying huge amount of money to showcase their products in front of public for gaining heavy profit of their products. In addition, these strategies are adopted in the form of bill boards. posters and through social media networking channels. Where, highly paid celebrities are sponcering their products to promote the sale of product.
Another pivotal facet, pertaining to this argument is that social media is the main plat form to display the product in commercials in between popular dramas and soaps to attain viewers attention. As a prime example, now a days technology has greatly been introduce local gadgets with more specifications in cheaper rates. Therefore, after visualizing their specifications people are trying to buy newly launched products with out any reason.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that advertisement is the key tool to achieve maximum profit of unnecessary things. Thus, ideas that will bring benefit would be cordially welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46946564885 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88696244906 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610687022901 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0632208963 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.357142857 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.096908685409 0.242375264174 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288265089241 0.0925447433944 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029965762924 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0546109257569 0.151781067708 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371082217675 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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