Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Nowadays, traveling in a group with a local guide is the new trend and often considered the best way to travel. However, despite its advantages, I do not think that it is the best traveling choice.
Undeniably, there are many upsides of traveling in this way. It does not require time to plan the journey. People nowadays have a mostly fast-paced lifestyle. Their time is precious and mostly used up in the daily chores. Therefore, when they seek a break from their office or school, traveling in a group with professional guides would save up a lot of time and energy. The guides will be in charge of the hotels, the transportation, the sightseeing spots, etc. This way, all one must do is to pay for the trip and sit back to relax along with a bunch of other travelers. It would provide a nice and easy trip and a short break from the exhausting working life. It is, without doubt, a great traveling choice for modern city workers without much time to spare on planning.
However, it is too absolute to conclude that it is the best way to travel. Traveling alone is also a great choice to travel. By traveling alone, one can take complete control over his or her journey. This means that one does not need to follow someone else's opinion and can move on his or her own pace. Everyone has a different habit and passion, what is good for one person may not be as good for another. Traveling alone ensures that one can visit places, where he or she thinks, is more interesting. Traveling alone works the best for students on gap years or senior citizens. A friend of my family likes to travel alone when he just retired. He speaks fluent English and Chinese, and he a good driver. He went to many places of the world till he was too old to travel alone. He told me that those were the most memorable moments of his life.
Another good way to travel is for a group of people, family or friends, to go on a self-driving tour without any guides. Traveling this way also has room for remaking decisions. If the group feel more inclined to stay in one place over another, they might agree on a change of plans. It is also very likely to be approved as most people are familiar with each other. My parents like to travel a lot. When I was young, we used to organize a self-driving tour with friends and other family members once a while. I remember once we went to Hawaii, we really liked the hotel we stayed in the Big Island. So we stayed in there for two more nights than we planned - a sudden change of plan which everyone agreed to. During the time, we went to see the active volcanoes and manage to not miss any other sightseeing spots we previously planned.
I do not think that traveling in a group with a guide is the best way to travel. It might be a good way of traveling; however, I believe that there are other better ways to travel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 780, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2321.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 530.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37924528302 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39793665287 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481132075472 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.0 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8784330399 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.3333333333 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0606060606 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.78787878788 5.45110844103 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212666178559 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062237924376 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689144853842 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159869908328 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705259863757 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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