Most alcoholics purchase liquor legally. According to your point of view, should stores in general be legally allowed to sell liquor to alcoholics?
The issue of alcohal has become a matter of discussion for quit some years now, although, some quarters of the society are engaged in discussing this vital topic. Yet, there have been no substantial result. Likewise, many alcoholics purchase liquor legally, whereas some people think that in stores should not be allowed to sale liquor. I will discuss both views and give my own opinion in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, more consumption of alcohol is fully wastage of money and energy, because some people consume more quantity of liquor, it has also effect on their health, due to which they have to face many health problems and they have to spent more more money in hospitals. Moreover, some persons are addicted of drinking alcohol, but whenever they do not get it, they can use astray like stealing and snatching, due to which it also increase the crime rate. Furthermore, large consuming of liquor also become major reason of demestics conflicts, even their offspring cannot pay proper attention towards their study and it also affect on their mind.
On the other side, some people think that it is good source for increasing the economy, because it has the government earn every year on the alcohol stores, due to which they spent in many developmet activities. Besisdes this, it also provide relaxation to their mind in this cut throat era.
In conclusion every coin has two sides, likewise this topic also has mixed bag. But according to my opinion all people should drink in their proper limit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'effected'.
Suggestion: effected
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Message: Use only 'more' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: more
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Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
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Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, likewise, moreover, so, whereas, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91796875 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38988129261 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6171875 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7877537861 50.4703680194 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.454545455 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167528404652 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678875931032 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12083126199 0.071462118173 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975279993397 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746606151303 0.0609392437508 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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