If you could travel back in time to meet famous person from history, what person would you like to meet? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
It is my dream to travel back in time. I want to go back in my childhood age and want to meet with famous personality of India whose name is A.P.J Abdul Kalam. Furthermore, it is a President of India in year 2002 to 2007. I will shed light and elaborate these points with suitable example before appropriate conclusion.
To begin with, in my childhood age my friends want to meet with famous singer or actor. But, I when I have chance to meet famous personality then I want to meet with President of India whose name is A.P.J Abdul Kalam because it is my dream and I have read all about this person. Moreover, it is very famous person all over the world. They had born in Tamil Nadu which is very beautiful state in South part of India.
In addition to, it is a very intelligent person and their brain was very sharp. If i have Chance to meet him i never miss it because he is my favorite person in the world after my Mom-Dad.
To sum up that, time is very precious for everyone and the earlier time never come back. And, with help of humanity and mankind person achieve good success in life-like our President.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 1207.87684729 76% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35714285714 5.00649968141 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3364847523 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 379.143842365 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8792135069 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.25 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220000883954 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856414268581 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561310433558 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140004158176 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238512455696 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 12.6369458128 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.1260098522 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 11.5310837438 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.32886699507 82% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 55.0591133005 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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