Government should allocate most educational resourses on science subject. Do you agree?
Now in the modern era, technology increases very rapidly. The government should divided educational resources on science subjects. They allocate the science subjects because in science there are many different categories. I will agree with this and discuss main points of this topic in upcoming paragraph before suitable conclusion.
To embark with, government should divide the educational resources in many different categories like in science, science contain many types of other subjects like physics, chemistry and biology these all three terms are the form from one term which is known as science.It is the beneficial for students because the don't learn all three subjects they chose only one which is very beneficial because rather than study three subjects with the help of this allocation they only learn one subject which they have interest.
Moreover, the government should take a decision on this step because it is beneficial for students as well beneficial for the teachers also. Furthermore, this is benefit for teachers because every teacher is not good on to teach all three subjects of science. So they teach one subject in very good way to students. Nowadays every school has different teachers for these different subjects.
To recapitulate, it is a good step by the government which is helpful individuals to allocate the educational resources of science subjects. When students learns science they achieve very good success in life.
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...cational resources of science subjects. When students learns science they achieve ve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3652173913 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69900212604 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 377.1 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 125.553320799 50.4703680194 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 112.181818182 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230460204425 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10473799854 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977771324134 0.071462118173 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16732224654 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712393667891 0.0609392437508 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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