Nowadays, television is an essential part of our lives, as a medium to spread news and awareness, and, for some, it even acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?
In this modern era, we are living in the modern society nowadays television is very essential part of our lives. television is an electronic device and it is very different. it is an entertainment apparatus. they give us many types of information and i will disscus my point of view in my upcoming paragraph.
First of all, millions people are watching television because they give us knowledge and some people depend on educational program available on the television to keep educating themselves or their children. also, they help reduce sadness and provide good feeling to the person as well as they have many types of channels like news, comedy and education program they represent good programs. they are very helpful.
On the other hand, sometime television are harmfull for infant to old person because they spreadout very harmfull rays they also effect on eye moreover,some children are not concentrate to the study. they are watching the television full day that is not good for education system and health. it keeps their mind distracted from a great numbers of problems.
In conclusion,television has became an essential part of our daily life something that should alarm us as well as people and companies that run television channels but they watching limit and excess is everything is bad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 215.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08837209302 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92418719321 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576744186047 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.349277675 50.4703680194 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4545454545 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151522961875 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639466158522 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594735254514 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105336937035 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501525538362 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.