Scientific research are carried and controlled by governments rather than private companies.
Do you agree or disagree
Give an example from your knowledge
It is commonly believed that scientific study results are contributed and restricted by the governments than private companies before providing to the public. In my opinion, I definitely disagree to limit the disclosure of information from any reliable sources that related to scientific research by the authorities.
Firstly, it is irrefutable that people need sufficient information before making any decisions. People should have the rights to know the real facts without limited by the authorities. Secondly, scientific research are considered as the most reliable sources of information which contain many methods of test, statistics and appropriate theories, used in their assumption before contributing to the public. If people gained more information accurately and obtained from wider sources of information, they would have more alternative choices of living.
Another points to be considered that the government are trying to protect the reputation and economy of the country. For example, private company warn people that there were a remarkably increased in the amount of air pollution, particulate matter (PM) up to 2.5 micro gram which extremely effect to the citizens on last year, while the government insisted to do nothing with this situation and announced an unrealistic and inaccessible information to all over the world. As the result, the limited information will not be provided to the people for their further protection and make their decision.
In my opinion, people should have an appropriate rights of accessing any information not only from a private companies but also other sources of information including scientific study results. Having sufficient and accurate information will help people to make their decision precisely and live with the facts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60516605166 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01946049007 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560885608856 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4502658908 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.090909091 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125089893155 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505342512096 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491368442272 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920991071732 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509060214687 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.