Due the advancement in computer technology the trend of working from home will bring a dramatic change to people’s lives. Is it a positive or negative development?
Give your opinion and examples.
As internet play an increasingly more central role in our life. It has been suggested that there has been unprecedented change in work culture by not only by increasing the efficiency but also raising productivity. It is obvious that this assertion is a positive development, moreover, this is an interesting trend that set conquer the corporate sectors.
Even though this activity of working from home has some implications such as network lags and meetings, it would be foolish to not to recognize the valuable role of advanced technology plays in eradicating the problems. Thanks to it, we can get in touch with any person, colleague or an organization, at the touch of a button, regardless the time-zone and location. For example, we can attend meetings with the team members on Skype and Microsoft Communicator; furthermore, if we want to work securely we can connect to a Virtual Private Network (VPN) which most of the companies are having. Therefore, the raise in computer technology uses internet to make our lives at ease is definitely a positive traction towards development.
Another point worth considering is, employees will be closer to their family and it is a great by-product of technology evolution and could be attributed to the change in lifestyle. For instance, previous generation worked nine-to-five jobs at office by travelling all the way to work, that results in increasing carbon foot-prints and waste of money. The millennial in stark contrast, are mostly employed with digital nomads, work at home when there is a need, and spend quality time with family. This is exemplified in a famous Wall Street journal that working-from-home is the most opted activity in the year 2018 for most of IT employees.
The Scientific expansions made the life of people easier; they could work from any part of the world. Work-at-home is the greatest creative concept introduced to have a work-life-balance. With this approach there will be productive outcomes and a healthy life. Despite the fact that, not all the companies are following this perspective I think in near future this concept will have its time
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16379310345 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07017470475 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591954022989 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.475952131 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.8 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173735523588 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574557036978 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360401944553 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10100050054 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193991014332 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.