Some people believe that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion
There has been a lively debate about whether a person turns to crime on account of their innate characteristics or social issues and poverty. Personally, I would think that crime stems from the latter.
There is undeniable that a person’s bad nature results in criminal behaviours. Firstly, it is typical of those who are work-shy but want to make money without effort to carry out crime because it is their easily distorted sense of values that will make it impossible for them to resist the temptation to earn easy money even if they have to get involved in illegal acts, for example heroin possession and dealing. Furthermore, bad-natured people can satisfy their personal requirements at all costs. This means that they have no hesitation in committing an offence no matter how detrimental it is to their community. Some rape offenders are, for instance, willing to murder their victims to cater for their sexual needs.
Nonetheless, it seems to me that the main cause of wrongdoing lies in both poverty and problems existing in society. If people have worked very hard but are still unable to make ends meet, they are more likely to be tempted into a life of crime with a view to not only improving their own living conditions but also supporting their family. As regards crime in consequence of social problems, a good example of these is an educational system that does attach too much significance to academic standards rather than moral ones. As a result, our future generations are not fully aware of right from wrong and thus might perform criminal actions.
To sum up, crime must largely be put down to poverty and social matters instead of individual nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, nonetheless, so, still, thus, as regards, for example, for instance, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92253521127 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67804781347 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669014084507 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0165506352 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236149941356 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851292570137 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579592495712 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140821625575 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325073238721 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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