The following is a recommendation from the personal director to the president of Acme Publishing Company.
"Many other companies have recently stated that having their employees take the Easy read speed reading course has greatly improved productivity, one graduate of the course was able to read a 500 page report in only two hours; another graduate rose from an assiatant manager to vice president of the company in under a year. Obviously the faster you can read, the more information you can absorb ina single workday. m\Morover, Easy read would cost Acme only $500 per employee a small price to pay when you consider the benefits. Included in this fee is a three week seminar in spruce city and a lifelong subscription to the easy read newsletter. Clearly, to improve overall producivity, Acme should require all of our employees to take the easy read course."
The recommendation that all of the employees of Acme publishing Company should take Easy Read course is not justified properly. As the director assumes that just taking the course will improve productivity of the comapny.
Firstly, the director states that other comapanies have started giving its employess easy reading course and it has greatly improved productivity. Is reading the ony quality which will help employee rise in the company ? what about qualities like leadership, time management, punctuality are they not neccesary trait in the employees.
In addition to that he also mentions how one graduate of the course was able to read 500-page report in only two hours. It is not justtified whether the document was difficult to read? what was the content of the document? merely stating the amount of page no necessarily give it importance. Another instance of Course graduate rising from assistant manager to vice president of company in under a year? Was that man promoted just because he could read well or there were other qualities in him that led to rise in such a position? It is also assumption on the part of wirter that reading fast can lead to more grasping of the material? How can compare to faster reading to efficient reading ?
Moreover it is said that it costs only $500 per employee ? how many emplyees are there in the organization is not mentioned ? if there are employess in thousands then would it be feasible to give course to each and everyone?
All of this should be taken into consideration before taking such a large step.
To sum up the director did not give convincing evidence about how effective the easy read course is for the employees in the company? As mere reading would not serve productivity to organization. An amployee has to be punctual and effcient to get the task done in time, not all employees have that caliber. A thorough analysis of course benefits must be done to ensure its implications in an organization.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: As the director assumes that just taking the course will improve productivity of the comapny.
Error: comapny Suggestion: company
Sentence: Firstly, the director states that other comapanies have started giving its employess easy reading course and it has greatly improved productivity.
Error: comapanies Suggestion: companies
Error: employess Suggestion: employers
Sentence: Is reading the ony quality which will help employee rise in the company ? what about qualities like leadership, time management, punctuality are they not neccesary trait in the employees.
Error: neccesary Suggestion: necessary
Error: punctuality Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: ony Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: It is not justtified whether the document was difficult to read? what was the content of the document? merely stating the amount of page no necessarily give it importance.
Error: justtified Suggestion: justified
Sentence: It is also assumption on the part of wirter that reading fast can lead to more grasping of the material?
Error: wirter Suggestion: writer
Sentence: Moreover it is said that it costs only 500 per employee ? how many emplyees are there in the organization is not mentioned ? if there are employess in thousands then would it be feasible to give course to each and everyone?
Error: emplyees Suggestion: employees
Error: employess Suggestion: employers
Sentence: An amployee has to be punctual and effcient to get the task done in time, not all employees have that caliber.
Error: amployee Suggestion: employee
Error: effcient Suggestion: efficient
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 333 350
No. of Characters: 1599 1500
No. of Different Words: 186 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.272 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.802 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.69 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 113 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 91 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.812 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.609 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.321 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.45 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.073 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
The recommendation that all of the employees of Acme publishing Company sh...
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Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... Read course is not justified properly. As the director assumes that just taking t...
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Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
...ill help employee rise in the company ? what about qualities like leadership, time ...
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Line 2, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mployee rise in the company ? what about qualities like leadership, time manageme...
^^
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
...her the document was difficult to read? what was the content of the document? merely...
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Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Merely
...? what was the content of the document? merely stating the amount of page no necessari...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ster reading to efficient reading ? Moreover it is said that it costs only 00 per em...
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Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: How
...id that it costs only 00 per employee ? how many emplyees are there in the organiza...
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Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... in the organization is not mentioned ? if there are employess in thousands then w...
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Line 8, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...se is for the employees in the company? As mere reading would not serve productivi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, well, as to, in addition, of course, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 55.5748502994 85% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 2260.96107784 72% => OK
No of words: 333.0 441.139720559 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91591591592 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78752704705 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 204.123752495 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.468620217663 115% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 705.55239521 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5223501943 57.8364921388 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.9523809524 119.503703932 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 23.324526521 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38095238095 5.70786347227 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.67664670659 214% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37208747983 0.218282227539 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100015952433 0.0743258471296 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926843306376 0.0701772020484 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181410692528 0.128457276422 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116885674917 0.0628817314937 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.3799401198 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.3550499002 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 98.500998004 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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