Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Presently, people are gradually aware of children’s important role in society as well as in the future development of human beings. Nevertheless, taking care of a child is absolutely challenging. Therefore, from my point of view, it is necessary that all parents participate in parenting courses.
The first reason is that parenting courses provide people with preparation for health emergencies such as allergic, broken bones or burns. Parents who are trained basic first aid in proper courses might find it more pragmatic than the others who only read it on the internet or books. In one moment, the child is playing happily, but the next, he might be bleeding or screaming when touching a hot cup of water. Therefore, having medical training to cope with sudden health problems is priority essential, particularly for the couple who first becomes a parent.
Besides, all mothers and fathers could learn appropriate educating methods for their children in parenthood preparation courses. Attending the courses, parents are guided by experts in detail all necessary skills from basic to advanced levels. There is a fact that nowadays, more and more parents pay attention to teach their children at an early age. Thus, it is vital for them to follow the right direction to avoid negative consequences in the future. A salient example is that many young children are forced to sit at their desks doing academic work, sometimes with little or no break. As a result, they might feel depressing and bored with learning.
Last but not least, parents might be taught how to deal with different emotional development of a child. When entering adolescence, children begin to witness a change in emotions such as becoming stubborn or being emotionally distant from their parents. Although the issues bewilder the parents, professional experts could give beneficial advice to handle conflicts and build bonds between family members.
In conclusion, parenting courses is an essential approach to raise children that is worth for all parents to invest in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to appropriate'
Suggestion: to appropriate
...es, all mothers and fathers could learn appropriate educating methods for their children in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27051671733 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79256384011 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613981762918 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1775941596 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185186320776 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574202407602 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333328179991 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990498215638 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159465796592 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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