In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime but some people believe that these measure restricts our individual freedom.
it is incontrovertible fact that technology has become an essential part in people's life and they do not imagine their life without it. The cameras are second security so, people used to reduced the crime rate in general places. However, few masses accord that it has some impact on the privacy of people. this essay examines the merits and demerits of this gadget.
To embark with, there are plethora of benefits having cameras in social places. Firstly, this device control illegal activities which done by the criminals as well as evoke the sense of fear among them. For example, if the cameras will used in that places, this tool will definitely control the criminal activities. In addition to this it is also save women from those people who misbehave with her. And , it is control the children kidnapping rate because criminals can not do these type of activities under the restrictions of cameras.
On the other hand, it has some effect on the private life of people. Nowadays, many of people are misuse of this device like, they capture the picture or videos of another people with their partner. After that, they are install it on the social networking sites. Moreover, people cannot do any activity or share personal things in pubic area because of cameras.
In conclusion, each coin has two aspects this device has more merits outweigh of demerits. because, it save the person's life from a lot of illegal activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89300411523 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4701217809 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0977649107 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.2666666667 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137452140531 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439626065886 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523764500553 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765544794396 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476614744874 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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