traffic congestion is increasing in major cities. what do you think is the reason for this?
Surely, there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals that traffic congestion has always been one of the prominent topics in contemporary discussions. people have always been intrigued to analyse and explain the reason for increasing traffic jams. I believe this is happening mainly due to the high number of personal vehicles and narrow roads.
Firstly, more people are buying personal vehicles these days. this is because modern technology has led to the mass production of cars. due to this, their price has declined and people can easily buy them even with a limited income.
Secondly, many of the major cities in the world have narrow roads. The reason for this is these cities were established at a time when there were no modern means of transportation. As a result, they are not able to deal with the current load of traffic. To put this into perspective, London was established when there were no vehicles. these days, the city suffers from a chronic congestion problem since its roads were not built for this level of traffic.
Hence based on the arguments above, I want to stress that the traffic congestion around the world is primarily rising because of the improved affordability of personal vehicles as well as the poor design of the roads.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, second, secondly, so, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91739130435 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61622464249 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5912547872 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217735850172 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719042700566 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565264174963 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113984314405 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555504920221 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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