Climate change is now an accepted threat to out planet, but there is not enough political actions to control excessive consumerism and pollution. Do you agree?
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Environmentalist has emphasized on the dire need to save earth from the menace of encouraged consumerism and pollution that has led to abrupt weather changes. Sadly, countries do not pay heed to the catastrophic effects it might bring soon and exploitation of natural resources further deteriorates the condition.
Firstly, it is universally accepted truth that earths' temperature is rising and glaciers melting rate is higher than ever before. Though countries come forward with initiatives to alleviate this threat, oftenly we see these initiatives to be only documented as proposed laws or policies and sparsely some could get through implementation phase. On the otherhand, policies that fosters economic growth gets in affect immediately, may it be at the expense of ruining our mother nature and consuming its resources. This reveals the hypocritical face of nations.
Other point to consider, beyond doubt pollution is the major factor that potentially impacts climate globally. International organizations such as United Nations (U.N.) alert through annual reports and offer suggestions to remediate. Unfortunately, governments of various nations do not work collabratively either due to complexities involved in implementing international laws and abiding them or due to neglegence towards these matters as they consider them to be low priority issues. Surprisingly, despite the ample awareness on detrimental effects caused by pollution and consumerism, yet there is not any international law implemented that enforce countries to limit their ways and make this world a better place for everyone.
All in all, the way exploitation of natural resources has gained momentum over last couple decades and influenced our planet climate is a serious concern that must be sorted through influence of global organizations by introducing the stern policies and ensuring governments do follow them.</span><br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[4]
Message: Did you mean 'in effect' (in substance, virtually)?
Suggestion: in effect
...icies that fosters economic growth gets in affect immediately, may it be at the expense o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83275261324 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.67089335176 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679442508711 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.9222598494 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.181818182 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0654152123559 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0208166261015 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0186618855272 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0383822884228 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139928329829 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.83 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.54 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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