People are moving to urban areas from rural areas for better life. What do you think about?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend to see prodigies discussing the fact that the trend of migration from rural tu urban areas has beneficial or worst outcomes. In my opinion, this trend is greatly been observed in people who are living in regions where quality of life is not satisfactory. In this essay, I, shall highlight some of the important features of this statement before deducing any conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments discussing the fact that why large number of people are migrating from rural areas to cities. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stem from the fact that in this contemporary world, people require quality of education for knowledge and career perspectives. Therefore, they prefer to migrate from villages to cities where education is an easy access to everyone. Moreover, in urban settings, jobs options are more as compared to rural areas and people can earn more money for themselves. As a prime example, according to recent world statistical data, migration trend has largely been observed among rural population for making better choices for themselves.
Another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that rural areas are more environmental friendly than urban dewelling. In addition, people there can enjoy natural environment pollution free atmosphere and organic food. Furthermore, they have time for social gatherings and other family events. But this statement does not hold fully water.
To recapitulate, the foregoing discussion propounds that urban areas provide people a suitable and best option according to the needs of today’s world. Therefore, that that will bring benefits would be cordially welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36940298507 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78059691478 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600746268657 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2652530612 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.785714286 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287476351177 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891139324014 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707549773612 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160685720858 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609506442898 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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