With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?
With the proliferation of social media websites and mobile applications, the uses of internet among youngsters in order to socialise with friends is gradually increasing which cause detrimental impacts on them. I believe that to cope with this situation the government should take several measures and parent should devote attention to their children.
Not only should the government make people aware amount the disastrous consequences of the extreme uses of social media in daily routine but also ratify some policies to control it’s daily accessibility. For instance, an immensely popular mobile video game PUBG has recently restricted online playing time to 4 hours which reduced the average screen time of youngsters to a large extent.Thus, if people will have limited time to use social media such as Facebook, Instagram in a day than it would compel them to assign more attention to important tasks.Moreover, different campaigns should be run by the government to make people aware about the negatives of extreme uses of social media that force people to think twice before it’s use.
Furthermore, parents should devote decent attention to their children internet’s browsing time. A recent report by BBC has revealed that about forty percent of young children who have no parent’s supervision spend most of their leisure time on surfing the social media portals. This not only effect their academic performance but also cause of several health diseases such as weaken eye sight. A little attention from parent on children’s internet accessibility could save them from all of these detrimental effects which again lead to better formation of their future.
In conclusion, in order to mitigate social media addiction among youngsters both the government and parents should come forward, otherwise the society will pay a heavy economic and social price.
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Suggestion: affect
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Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46416382253 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89002129566 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590443686007 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.61270955 49.4020404114 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.888888889 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5555555556 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16503270386 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072678823636 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734642443928 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112829483207 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677107024405 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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