Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
These days, environmental degradation has become alarming all over the world. Whether the cost of fuel for transportation should be raised to solve this issue is a debatable topic. For me, there are other more workable solutions.
It is obvious that increasing the fuel price can have negative impacts on society as the gap between the rich and the poor may be loosened. This is because it seems that only wealthy people could afford the accelerating price and the others with low income may suffer from financial pressure. In fact, the average salary of a graduate is about 5 million VND, if the price of petrol increases by 1000 VND/litter, he has to allocate nearly 1 million VND each month just for commuting demand.
Environment-related problems could be addressed effectively by other methods. First, the government should reach international collaboration on limiting exhaust fume from industrial activities. As it is the main culprit of Greenhouse Effect, the primary cause of Global warming which is threatening the habitat of endangered species. Another crucial measure worth mentioning is to raise the public awareness as each individual could put effort to prevent bad impacts on the mother land. For example, the Earth hour has achieved huge success all over the world, which attracted millions of young people together protecting the green of the Earth, simply by switching off all electricity devices for one hour.
It is also true that higher price of fuel may encourage people to travel by public transportation rather than their private vehicles. However, its disadvantages are more significant.
In conclusion, it is my belief that dealing with environmental degradation consists of both governmental and individual efforts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31768953069 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02100713661 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653429602888 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5819316375 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.214285714 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186217791945 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553193449639 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461544400185 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955317991253 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418561134612 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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