Companies like Apple come up with new version of their products every few months. Is it good to adapt the new technology and products as soon as they are released, or shall we wait for them to become more common and mainstream?
In this moder era, many organizations tend to release technologically developed product at their earliest in order to survive in the turbulent market conditions. Companies such as Apple highly invest on research and innovation to bear the market leadership with them. On my point of view, it is not necessary to introduce products to the market in short time period.
Firstly, there are advantages of upgrading products within short period of time. For example, electronic devices like computers and mobile phones are upgraded more frequently compared with other devices. Therefore people are influenced to spend more on technically sophisticated products compared with other expenditure on food, education and healthcare. This is more serious with younger generations because they do not want to get isolated from the society.
Considering above factors, it is recommended to invest more on research and development, but in fair time period. It is also believed, that companies should conduct a market research before launching a product to the market in order to identify the requirement and preferences of the people, because it is important to find the best time and product to launch a prodct in all markets. Unlike the essentials, companies have a risk of not succeding their proct in the market.
In conclusion, innovations are the pillars of a successfulness of either organizations or countries. So, companies have to take the feedback fro the consumers before launching another product within a short time priod of time. Within these, positive and negative feedbacks, companies can mitigate the failure of the product or the marketing strategy in improving productivity together with it's revenue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 31.9359605911 166% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42696629213 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0458627357 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569288389513 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9377094712 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.461538462 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207532239679 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745310361337 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336147182593 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129326945089 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022713318115 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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