Recently, proponents are having a heated debate over the issue of climate change, needless to say, that it is an important subject to discuss, as the whole ecosystem of the earth is impacted by someway from this phenomenon. If given a choice, I would like to study in the area of global warming because of the deteriorating condition of the atmosphere.
To begin with, massive industrialization and urbanization has lead to mammoth deforestations. More and more trees are being wiped out for developing societies and economic activities. For instance, in India alone, one-fourth of forests are reduced to cater to higher housing demand to support population growth. Moreover, to support commute, increasingly vehicles are being added on roads emitting an enormous amount of toxic gases leading to greenhouse effects.
Global warming is a fundamentally important subject, if we do not take care of pollution by imposing stricter environmental laws and plant more trees, it will be difficult to survive. For example, as a citizen and society as a whole, we should use public transportation and prohibit using plastic made by harmful chemicals. Government and industries should innovate products and technology in the area of alternate source of energies like solar and wind power, reducing our reliance on fossil fuels.
In conclusion, from the above examples, it is evident that we must preserve our planet for future generations by adopting and increasing the renewable source of energies.
- Value added by travel in Education. Is travel a necessary component of education or not ? Will student sitting at home have more knowledge? ORStudent travel to study is over rated, we have brilli 88
- if acting one's belief is better than just talking about it? 55
- Some organisations integrate employees in decision making process of their goods and services. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. 85
- Talk about the pros/cons of this era as is full of daily invention. Any recent invention that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society. 11
- The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants for our planet and give the solution. 80
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36016949153 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09704604374 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665254237288 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3625456494 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0833840704405 0.242375264174 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0305589201732 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329951635782 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0463768016401 0.151781067708 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260621616371 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.93 8.32886699507 131% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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