You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect.
Write a letter to the bank. Explain what has happened and say what you would like them to do about it.
Dear, Mr. Perera,
I’m writing to you to make a complaint about a letter I have received on 20th of May 2019, regarding an overdraft amount from your branch. My account name is K.C.K. Peiris which bears the number 2041056.
I have been using the above mentioned account from year 2000, in fact I have used this account to receive my salary and also I have used this to pay my utility bills as well. In the year, 2014 I have made a standing order to pay $ 240 to Barclays Bank as the loan installment of the loan I have borrowed from them. However, it has been settled in February, but your company has sent a cheque to Barclays bank amounting to $240 in the moth of April 2019 and that payment has made an overdraft in my bank account equal to the aforesaid amount. Consequentely, they have charged a further $7 as the interest payment for one month time as well.
Therefore, you are kindly requested to stop the standing order with an immediate affect as per the agerement we have signed in the year of 2014. Further, I wish you could correct this error and transfer the withdrawn amount to my account at your earliest, since I need that money to settle the rent of my apartment.
Looking forward a favorable reply.
Yours Faithfully,
K.C.K Peiris
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$240'.
Suggestion: $240
...014 I have made a standing order to pay $ 240 to Barclays Bank as the loan installmen...
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Line 5, column 583, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nsequentely, they have charged a further as the interest payment for one month ti...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[10]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...op the standing order with an immediate affect as per the agerement we have signed in ...
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Line 13, column 5, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: K
...able reply. Yours Faithfully, K.C.K Peiris
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59030837004 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44640929455 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5859030837 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3701067296 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300532154768 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104375923124 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051278295689 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154383044215 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918531542501 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.