what are the advantages and disadvantages of mass media
Surely, there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals mass media has been the one of prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always held some conflicting views on this . This essay will discuss both sides of the argument.
The first and foremost view is that, there are many merits of mass media . Firstly, it is a source of news. people can learn many news with the help of mass media as well as they can find jobs with the help of news. Further, it is also the source of entertainment For instance, people can watch movies and play games by using mass media. Moreover, we can communicate with anyone around the world.
Apart from this, there are many demerits of mass media. people mostly spend their free time on mobile phones but it is harmful for human body. Moving further, children watch movies and they do not concentrate on their studies As a result of this they are weak in their studies.
In conclusion, mass media is very important for people and it makes person's life comfortable but on the other hand , there are many disadvantages of mass media if people miss use mass media.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 1207.87684729 82% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69194312796 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4211380252 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57345971564 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 379.143842365 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9874593845 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1538461538 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255157987015 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882450625871 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111598985448 0.071462118173 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170068218645 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118785815456 0.0609392437508 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.1260098522 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.5310837438 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.